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Zan Tafakari's avatar

I enjoyed this! The pace kept me hooked. Also build a lot of intrigue - why the hell are you getting slugged... what's the slugger still doing there after a whole night of wrecking your place....i need a part 2

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Ben Saltiel's avatar

Hey Zan, thank you so much for your kind comments!

Really glad you liked it and maybe there will be a part 2 at some point

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David Hodge's avatar

Good suspense Ben - I'm with Zan. Bring on Part 2!

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Ben Saltiel's avatar

Thank you @David Hodge ! Appreciate the kind words.

If the people need a part II I suppose I’ll need to write one in the upcoming weeks or months.

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